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Acts on docs/design/2026_08_29_proposed_tso_batch_slot_claims.md, whose stated purpose was to get a tradeoff decided before either option lands.

The decision

Phase D stays batched. §3.1 (force batchSize == 1) is rejected as an interim: CLAUDE.md names "no Raft round trip per Next()" as the invariant batching exists to preserve, and §3.1 would violate it on exactly the Phase-D path — in exchange for a window that narrows from unbounded to one round trip rather than closing. §3.2 (durable per-slot claims) remains the fix and needs its own proposal, because a claim record is a wire/on-disk decision: what it is, who owns it, how it compacts, what happens across leadership change.

This PR lands the two pieces that do not depend on that choice.

§3.3 — Internal.Forward behind the admin token

The doc calls this "worth doing regardless". adminTokenProtectedMethod already covered Internal.ForwardAdminProposal and Internal.ForwardLeaseRead; Internal.Forward was the one forward left outside it, which made it the cheapest route to the durable-timestamp validation path for anything with peer-port reach.

Both halves ship together, which is the load-bearing detail: kv/leader_proxy.go's lease-read forward already attached the token, the write forward did not. Protecting the method without attaching the credential would have broken every forwarded write instead of authenticating it.

An empty token attaches nothing on the client and disables enforcement on the server, so an unconfigured cluster behaves exactly as before on both ends — the change is symmetric by construction.

SetLeaderReadToken gains SetPeerForwardToken as the name for what it now covers; the old name stays as the setter it delegates to.

§6 — the invariants that hold whichever option lands

  • issuance is unique across concurrent allocators, direct and batched
  • issuance is strictly monotonic
  • a timestamp past the highest committed window end is refused

OCC's conflict check is latestTS(key) > startTS, so two commits sharing a timestamp can each read the other as not-newer. Uniqueness is load-bearing for correctness, and it has to survive whatever the slot-claim work changes about validation — so these are written before the mechanism is chosen rather than after.

Deliberately not added: a test asserting that an unclaimed slot inside a committed window is refused. It is not refused today — that is the hole the design doc exists to close — and asserting current behaviour there would lock in the bug.

Risk

RelayPublish, ExportRangeVersions, ImportRangeVersions and PromoteStagedVersions remain outside the gate. Each needs the same two-sided treatment, and their clients are constructed through the split-migration factory rather than in these packages, so wiring them here without being able to exercise them end to end would risk breaking the migration plane. Tracked, not half-done.

Test evidence

  • go test ./kv/ -race -count=1 -timeout 40mok 17.0s
  • golangci-lint --config=.golangci.yaml run ./kv/... ./adapter/... — 0 issues
  • Revert-checks, each confirming the named test fails with the change reverted and the file restores byte-exact:
    • write forward attaches no token → TestForwardedWriteCarriesThePeerToken FAILS
    • Internal.Forward outside the gate → TestInternalForwardIsBehindTheAdminToken FAILS
    • BatchAllocator collapses adjacent offsets → TestBatchAllocatorIssuesEachTimestampAtMostOnce FAILS with handed timestamp 117275466911514686 out 2 times

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  1. Data loss — none. No write path changes behaviour; the forward gains a header. A cluster with no token configured is unaffected on both ends.
  2. Concurrency / distributed failures — the new tests exercise concurrent issuance under -race. The auth change is on the forwarding path only; leadership change and retry behaviour are untouched.
  3. Performance — one metadata entry per forwarded write. No extra round trips: rejecting §3.1 is precisely the decision not to add per-timestamp consensus.
  4. Data consistency — the uniqueness and monotonicity invariants are now pinned rather than assumed. The unclaimed-slot window is unchanged and stays documented as open.
  5. Test coverage — three revert-checked properties plus the boundary case above the allocation floor.

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  • 新機能

    • 内部書き込み転送でも、設定されたBearerトークンを使用した認証が行われるようになりました。
    • トークン未設定時は、従来どおり認証情報を付与せず動作します。
  • バグ修正

    • 認証対象外だった内部転送処理を保護し、不正な転送要求を防止します。
  • テスト

    • 転送時の認証情報、未設定時の動作、タイムスタンプの一意性・単調増加性を検証するテストを追加しました。

Acts on docs/design/2026_08_29_proposed_tso_batch_slot_claims.md, whose
purpose was to get a tradeoff decided. The decision: Phase D stays
batched. §3.1 (batch size 1) would put a Raft round trip on every Next(),
which CLAUDE.md names as the invariant batching exists to preserve, and it
buys a window that narrows rather than closes. §3.2 remains the fix and
needs its own proposal, because a claim record is a wire/on-disk decision.

Two decision-independent pieces land here.

§3.3 for Internal.Forward. It was the only forward outside
adminTokenProtectedMethod while ForwardAdminProposal and ForwardLeaseRead
were both inside it, so it was the cheapest route to the durable-timestamp
validation path for anything with peer-port reach. Both halves ship
together: the server gate, and the peer token on the outbound write
forward -- protecting the method without attaching the credential would
have broken every forwarded write instead of authenticating it. An empty
token attaches nothing and disables enforcement, so an unconfigured
cluster behaves exactly as before on both ends.

The §6 invariants that hold whichever option eventually lands: issuance is
unique across concurrent allocators, direct and batched, and strictly
monotonic. OCC's conflict check is latestTS(key) > startTS, so two commits
sharing a timestamp can each read the other as not-newer -- uniqueness is
load-bearing, and it has to survive whatever the slot-claim work changes
about validation.

Deliberately not added: a test that an unclaimed slot inside a committed
window is refused. It is not refused today; that is the hole, and
asserting current behaviour would lock in the bug.

RelayPublish, ExportRangeVersions, ImportRangeVersions and
PromoteStagedVersions stay outside the gate for now: each needs the same
two-sided treatment and their clients are built through the migration
factory rather than here, so they are tracked rather than half-wired.

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Internal転送認証

Layer / File(s) Summary
Internal.Forwardの認証ゲート
adapter/admin_grpc.go, adapter/admin_grpc_test.go
Internal.Forward を管理トークン認証の保護対象に追加した。関連する転送RPCと保護対象・非保護対象の判定をテストする。
書き込み転送のトークン付与
kv/sharded_coordinator.go, kv/leader_proxy.go, kv/sharded_coordinator_leader_test.go
設定済みのピアトークンを、LeaderProxy.forward の送信メタデータへBearer形式で付与する。空トークン時は認証メタデータを付与しない。

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TSO発行不変条件の検証
kv/tso_slot_claim_test.go, docs/design/2026_08_29_proposed_tso_batch_slot_claims.md
直接AllocatorとBatchAllocatorの重複しない発行、厳密な単調増加、AllocationFloorを超えるタイムスタンプと0の拒否を検証する。バッチ方式と関連する設計決定を記録する。

Priority: ⬇️ Low

Estimated code review effort: 3 (Moderate) | ~20 minutes

Change: Bug fix

Merge Risk: 🟡 Moderate · up to 69688

Configured peer forwarding now sends an admin bearer token without transport encryption. Protect peer traffic with verified TLS or avoid sending credentials over plaintext before merging.

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Comment thread kv/tso_slot_claim_test.go Outdated
end := fsm.AllocationFloor()
require.GreaterOrEqual(t, end, issued)

require.Error(t, alloc.ValidateDurableTimestamp(ctx, end+1),

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P2 Badge Activate Phase D before checking the allocation bound

The fixture never activates Phase D: alloc.Next only reserves a normal window, so ValidateDurableTimestamp returns ErrTSOPhaseDInactive before evaluating timestamp > AllocationFloor(). Consequently this assertion still passes if the actual upper-bound validation is removed, leaving the stated invariant untested; activate Phase D first and assert the expected invalid-timestamp error.

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§3.2 remains the fix and needs its own proposal, because the claim record is a
wire/on-disk decision (§5 questions 2 and 3).

Landed now, both decision-independent:

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P2 Badge Promote the design document after shipping milestones

This section explicitly records §3.3 and the invariant tests as landed while §3.2 remains outstanding, so retaining both the _proposed_ filename and Status: Proposed misclassifies the document's implementation state. Rename it to _partial_ and update the header now that the first milestones have shipped, as required by the repository's design-document lifecycle.

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**Phase D stays batched.** §3.1 is rejected as an interim: `CLAUDE.md` states
that no Raft round trip per `Next()` is a design invariant — it is what batching
exists for — and §3.1 would violate it on exactly the Phase-D path. Trading a
throughput regression for a window that narrows but does not close is not worth
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P3 Badge Remove the settled batching choice from open questions

The new decision definitively rejects §3.1 and says Phase D stays batched, but §5 question 1 still asks whether Phase D should stay batched or use per-timestamp round trips. Leaving the decided choice under “Open questions” makes the document internally contradictory for the follow-up claim proposal; mark that question resolved or remove it.

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Comment thread adapter/admin_grpc.go
// only forward left outside this gate while its two siblings were
// inside it, which made it the cheapest way to that path for anything
// with peer-port reach.
fullMethod == pb.Internal_Forward_FullMethodName

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P1 Badge Stage enforcement until every forwarding peer is upgraded

During a rolling upgrade of a token-configured cluster, an old follower does not attach the newly added header, while an upgraded node immediately requires it whenever that node is the group leader. Every write entering such an old follower and forwarding to the upgraded leader therefore fails with Unauthenticated until the follower is upgraded or leadership moves; shipping both halves in one binary does not address cross-node version skew, so enforcement needs a capability/full-rollout activation gate or an explicit safe rollout mechanism.

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Comment thread kv/tso_slot_claim_test.go Outdated
t.Parallel()

alloc, _ := newSlotClaimTSOFixture(t)
batch, err := NewBatchAllocator(alloc, 16)

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P2 Badge Exercise separate allocators in the concurrency property

The Phase-D uniqueness test creates only one BatchAllocator and sends every goroutine through it. That allocator's refill mutex serializes all window reservations, so the test covers concurrent claims inside one local window but cannot detect overlapping windows returned to separate node-local batch allocators, which is the cross-allocator property the document and PR claim to pin; issue concurrently through several BatchAllocator instances backed by the shared TSO service/state and merge their results.

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In `@docs/design/2026_08_29_proposed_tso_batch_slot_claims.md`:
- Around line 110-117: Update the §1 Exposure description to explicitly identify
the unauthenticated Internal.Forward state as pre-introduction or rewrite it in
the past tense, consistent with the implemented server gate and outbound
forwarding token described in §4a.

In `@kv/leader_proxy.go`:
- Line 265: Update LeaderProxy.forward so the bearer token is added only when
the peer connection uses TLS with certificate verification; otherwise omit the
authorization metadata for insecure connections. Preserve token forwarding for
authenticated TLS connections and align the check with GRPCConnCache.ConnFor and
its dial credentials.

In `@kv/tso_slot_claim_test.go`:
- Line 119: Extend the BatchAllocator test around batch.Next to verify strict
monotonicity, not only uniqueness: call BatchAllocator.Next sequentially using a
fresh fixture and assert each returned value is greater than the immediately
preceding value.
- Around line 67-69: Update both test sites in kv/tso_slot_claim_test.go at
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Comment thread docs/design/2026_08_29_partial_tso_batch_slot_claims.md
Comment thread kv/leader_proxy.go
// enforcement for an empty token -- an unconfigured cluster behaves
// exactly as before, on both ends.
if token := p.group.peerForwardToken(); token != "" {
ctx = metadata.AppendToOutgoingContext(ctx, "authorization", "Bearer "+token)

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TLS なしの peer 接続で bearer token を送信しないでください。

LeaderProxy.forwardpeerForwardToken が設定されている場合に authorization: Bearer ... を付加します。GRPCConnCache.ConnForinternalutil.GRPCDialOptions()insecure.NewCredentials() を使用するため、token が平文で送信されます。TLS(証明書検証付き)を必須にするか、平文接続では token を送信しないでください。

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In `@kv/leader_proxy.go` at line 265, Update LeaderProxy.forward so the bearer
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Comment thread kv/tso_slot_claim_test.go
Comment thread kv/tso_slot_claim_test.go
Four of the five review findings were the same defect in different
places: the tests asserted properties they could not actually observe.

The allocation-floor test never reached the bound. ValidateDurableTimestamp
refuses an inactive Phase D first, so on an unactivated fixture every
timestamp was refused for the wrong reason and the assertion held with
the bound deleted. It now activates Phase D, asserts a timestamp inside
the committed window validates -- which is what makes the two refusals
about the bound rather than the state -- and pins ErrTSOTimestampInvalid
rather than any error at all.

Both concurrency tests discarded allocator errors with a bare continue.
Uniqueness over whatever happened to succeed is satisfied by a single
timestamp, so a fixture failing almost every call still looked like a
passing property. They now collect the errors, require none, and require
exactly goroutines*perWorker issued values.

The batched test drove eight goroutines through one BatchAllocator,
whose refill mutex serialises every reservation and makes the
interesting failure -- two node-local allocators handed overlapping
windows -- unreachable. It now runs one allocator per goroutine over
shared TSO state, which is the shape production has.

Uniqueness alone accepts a window handed out backwards, so the batched
path gets the ordering half too. Verified: reversing tryWindowAfter
leaves the uniqueness test passing and fails the new monotonic one.

Worth recording for whoever changes reservation next: uniqueness is
guarded twice, by the allocator's reservation mutex and by the HLC's
CAS. Removing either alone leaves every test passing; both had to go
before the multi-allocator test failed, and even then it caught it 3
runs in 6.

Also documents the two properties of the Internal.Forward gate that
review surfaced and that are not visible from the code: a node on an
older binary does not attach the header, so every node must be upgraded
before the gate can be relied on; and the token crosses the peer network
in cleartext, because no peer dial in this process can be TLS. The gate
is a barrier against reaching the peer port, not against observing it --
withholding the token on an insecure connection would disable it
everywhere rather than harden it, so confidentiality is left to peer
mTLS.

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Anchored files changed in this PR head (ea2e35c):

  • kv/sharded_coordinator.go

What to check, by subsystem:

  • kv/hlc*.goNext() must respect the HLC-4 preconditions (i)/(ii)/(iii) from the design doc: bounded skew, logical-counter handoff on leader change (strategy (c) Observe(MaxAppliedHLC)), and the commit-time ceiling fence (fail-closed when wall_now >= physicalCeiling). Any change to the bit layout (48/16), the CAS loop, or the ceiling getter/setter is in scope.
  • kv/coordinator.go, kv/sharded_coordinator.goRunHLCLeaseRenewal, hlcRenewalInterval, hlcPhysicalWindowMs constants, and the new-term detection that calls Observe(fsm.MaxAppliedHLC()) (strategy (c)). Any change to renewal cadence, group selection, or fail-closed behaviour is in scope.
  • kv/transaction.go, kv/lock_resolver.go — OCC commit-ts assignment, lock-map encoding (key, lock_ts) -> start_ts, and the LockResolver action OCC-3 depends on. (M2 spec will land OCC-1..OCC-5; until then the spec doc §5.2 is the contract.)
  • kv/fsm.go — FSM apply of HLC lease entries (SetPhysicalCeiling), and any future MaxAppliedHLC() accessor that strategy (c) needs.
  • store/mvcc_store.go — version visibility, snapshot install, and the MVCC-1..MVCC-4 invariants (M3 scope).
  • distribution/** — route catalog versioning, SplitRange atomicity, and CatalogWatcher async fan-out (M4 scope).

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9 件すべて確認しました。テスト系 4 件はいずれも「主張している性質を実際には観測していない」という同じ欠陥で、指摘どおりです。

1. allocation floor の上限テスト (codex P2) — 指摘の機構が正確でした。ValidateDurableTimestampPhaseDActive() を先に見るため、Phase D 未活性の fixture では全タイムスタンプが別の理由 (ErrTSOPhaseDInactive) で拒否され、上限チェックを削除しても require.Error が通ります。Phase D を活性化し、「窓の内側のタイムスタンプは通る」ことを先に確認したうえで ErrTSOTimestampInvalid を pin しました。revert-check: timestamp > end を削除すると FAIL します。

2. 並行テストのエラー握りつぶし (coderabbit) — 指摘どおりです。continue で捨てていたため、大半の呼び出しが失敗してもユニーク性は成立してしまいます。両方の箇所でエラーを収集し、0 件であることと goroutines * perWorker 件の発行を検証するようにしました。

3. BatchAllocator を複数にする (codex P2) — 指摘どおりです。単一 allocator では refill mutex が全予約を直列化するため、「複数のノードローカル allocator に重なった窓が渡る」という当該の失敗に到達できません。goroutine ごとに BatchAllocator を作り、同一 TSO state を共有する形(本番と同じ形)にしました。

ただし正直に付記すると、この性質は二重に守られています。allocator 側の予約 mutex と HLC の CAS の両方です。片方だけ壊しても全テストが通り、両方壊して初めて multi-allocator テストが落ちました(6 回中 3 回)。単一 allocator 版より厳密に強いものの、単独の revert-check で落とせる性質ではありません。

4. BatchAllocator の厳密単調性 (coderabbit) — 指摘どおりです。TestTSOIssuanceIsStrictlyMonotonicRaftTSOAllocator のみを対象にしていました。逐次版を追加しました。revert-check: tryWindowAfter を降順(w.base + w.size - 1 - off)にすると、ユニーク性テストは PASS のままで新しい単調性テストだけが FAIL します — ご指摘の穴がそのまま再現しました。

5. design doc のライフサイクル (codex P2 / P3, coderabbit) — 3 件とも対応しました。git mv_proposed__partial_ にリネームし、Status: Partial へ、§5 の質問 1 を「§4a で解決済み」と明記、§1 の Exposure を導入前の記述として過去形に修正し、_implemented_ になる条件(§3.2 の claim record が入り、未claim slot のテストが通る assertion として書けること)を追記しました。


6. ローリングアップグレード時のスキュー (codex P1) — 機構は正確です。admin token 設定済みクラスタでは、旧バイナリの follower はヘッダを付けないため、アップグレード済みノードがリーダーのとき当該 follower 経由の書き込みが Unauthenticated で失敗します。

現状のまま出し、手順を明記する方針としました。理由は、これが ForwardLeaseRead が既に同じ形(サーバ側ゲート + トークン付与、段階フラグなし)で出荷済みのスキュー窓と同一であり、兄弟 RPC のためだけに二つ目のロールアウト機構を作るより既存の前例に揃えるほうが一貫するためです。kv/leader_proxy.go のコメントと design doc §4a に「ゲートに依存する前に全ノードをアップグレードすること」を明記しました。token 未設定のクラスタは両端とも影響を受けません。

7. 平文での bearer token 送信 (coderabbit Major / CWE-319) — 機構は正確です。ただし提案された対策は採用しません。

internal.GRPCDialOptionsinsecure.NewCredentials() のみで、サーバ側に peer TLS の選択肢が一切存在しません(TLS があるのは cmd/elastickv-admin などのクライアントツールだけです)。したがって「TLS のときだけトークンを送る」は、全デプロイでこのゲートを事実上オフにします — Internal.Forward はサーバ側で保護されるのに、どのクライアントも認証できない状態になります。強化ではなく無効化です。

また、トークンの隣を流れる Raft トラフィック自体が同じく平文であり、当該ネットワーク上の観測者はすでにそれを読み書きできます。つまりこのゲートが上げているのは「peer ポートに到達する」ハードルであって「観測する」ハードルではなく、それは §1 の exposure(durable-timestamp 検証パスへの未認証の到達)の正しい読み方でもあります。同じパターンは ForwardLeaseRead で既に出荷済みでもあります。

機密性は peer mTLS で解くべきもので、別 PR として切り出します。この判断と根拠は kv/leader_proxy.go のコメントと design doc §4a の両方に残しました。


検証: go test ./kv/ -race -count=1 → ok 19.077s、golangci-lint ./kv/... → 0 issues。

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Claude finished @bootjp's task in 1m 46s —— View job


Review

  • Gather context (PR diff, prior codex/coderabbit review threads, author's replies)
  • Read changed files at current HEAD (adapter/admin_grpc.go, kv/leader_proxy.go, kv/sharded_coordinator.go, kv/tso_slot_claim_test.go, design docs)
  • Verify status of previously-raised findings (Phase D activation, error swallowing, multi-allocator, monotonicity, doc lifecycle, TLS/plaintext token)
  • Check for anything new/unaddressed
  • Post final review

Scope reviewed: current HEAD (ea2e35c), i.e. after the author's 2026-09-15 round addressing the codex/coderabbit threads.

Previously-raised findings — verified resolved

All nine items the author replied to are genuinely fixed in ea2e35c, not just claimed fixed:

  • TestValidateDurableTimestampRefusesBeyondTheAllocationFloor now activates Phase D (fsm.Apply(marshalTSOCutover()) / marshalTSOPhaseD(1)) and asserts an in-window timestamp validates before asserting the out-of-window one is refused with ErrTSOTimestampInvalid (not ErrTSOPhaseDInactive) — kv/tso_slot_claim_test.go:207-229. This closes the gap where deleting the real bound check would previously still pass.
  • Both concurrency tests now collect errors into a failures slice and assert require.Empty/require.Equal(goroutines*perWorker, total) instead of continue-ing past them (kv/tso_slot_claim_test.go:59-98, 125-155).
  • TestBatchAllocatorIssuesEachTimestampAtMostOnce now constructs one BatchAllocator per goroutine (8, sharing the underlying RaftTSOAllocator/TSO state) instead of one shared allocator serialized behind a refill mutex — kv/tso_slot_claim_test.go:105-156.
  • TestBatchAllocatorIssuanceIsStrictlyMonotonic was added as a sequential-by-design counterpart to the uniqueness test — kv/tso_slot_claim_test.go:162-177.
  • The design doc was git mv'd _proposed__partial_, Status: Partial, §5 question 1 struck through with a pointer to §4a's resolution, and §1's Exposure section rewritten in the past tense ("as of 2026-08-29; closed by §4a") — docs/design/2026_08_29_partial_tso_batch_slot_claims.md.
  • The rolling-upgrade skew (codex P1) and plaintext-token (coderabbit Major/CWE-319) findings were both left as-is with reasoning added inline (kv/leader_proxy.go:258-276) and in the doc (§4a), rather than code changes. The reasoning holds up: internal.GRPCDialOptions() is insecure.NewCredentials()-only with no peer-TLS option anywhere in the server, so gating the token on TLS would disable the check in every current deployment rather than harden it — and the adjacent Raft traffic is equally plaintext, so this doesn't reduce confidentiality, only reach. Reasonable tradeoff, consistent with the already-shipped ForwardLeaseRead precedent, and tracked separately for peer mTLS.

New finding

Stale filename references from the design-doc rename. The doc was correctly git mv'd to 2026_08_29_partial_tso_batch_slot_claims.md and docs/design/2026_09_02_proposed_prephase_d_resolution_evidence.md's cross-link was updated to match, but three other comments still point at the old _proposed_ filename, which no longer exists:

  • kv/tso_slot_claim_test.go:14
  • kv/sharded_coordinator_leader_test.go:227
  • adapter/admin_grpc_test.go:1151

All three say docs/design/2026_08_29_proposed_tso_batch_slot_claims.md; it should be 2026_08_29_partial_tso_batch_slot_claims.md. Low severity (comment-only, doesn't affect test behavior), but worth a quick fix since the PR's own stated purpose is to keep the design doc's lifecycle marker accurate — leaving three stale pointers to the pre-rename name undercuts that. Fix this →

Other observations (no action needed)

  • SetPeerForwardToken/peerForwardToken correctly delegate to the existing SetLeaderReadToken/forwardedLeaderReadToken storage, so main.go:2615's single existing call site now configures both the lease-read forward and the write forward — no wiring gap, and an unconfigured cluster stays a no-op on both ends as claimed.
  • adminTokenProtectedMethod gate and TestInternalForwardIsBehindTheAdminToken / TestForwardedWriteCarriesThePeerToken / TestForwardedWriteWithoutATokenAttachesNothing line up with the PR's stated revert-checks.
  • kv/sharded_coordinator.go's diff (flagged by the auto TLA+ divergence bot for being an anchored file) is pure token-getter/setter wiring — it doesn't touch Next(), the ceiling CAS, or lease renewal, so there's no HLC/TLA+ spec divergence here.
  • Could not execute go build/go test/golangci-lint in this session (sandboxed, non-interactive — command approval unavailable); review is based on static reading of the diff and current file state, not a fresh test run. The author's reported go test ./kv/ -race -count=1 (19.077s) and golangci-lint ./kv/... (0 issues) stand as the test evidence.

Overall: the substantive review threads (test-tautology bugs, error-swallowing, single-allocator blind spot, monotonicity gap, doc lifecycle) are all correctly fixed with matching revert-checks, not just claimed fixed. Only the stale filename references are outstanding, and they're cosmetic.

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Comment thread adapter/admin_grpc.go
// only forward left outside this gate while its two siblings were
// inside it, which made it the cheapest way to that path for anything
// with peer-port reach.
fullMethod == pb.Internal_Forward_FullMethodName

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P2 Badge Authenticate the legacy coordinator's forward calls

When code uses the exported NewCoordinatorWithEngine path with an admin-token-protected peer, follower writes still go through Coordinate.redirect, whose cli.Forward call at kv/coordinator.go:1525 never attaches the token and has no token configuration surface. Adding the global gate here therefore makes every such redirected write fail with Unauthenticated; thread the peer credential through this forwarding implementation as well, rather than updating only LeaderProxy.forward.

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Comment thread kv/tso_slot_claim_test.go
func TestBatchAllocatorIssuesEachTimestampAtMostOnce(t *testing.T) {
t.Parallel()

alloc, _ := newSlotClaimTSOFixture(t)

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P2 Badge Activate Phase D in the issuance property tests

The fixture used here never applies the cutover or Phase-D markers, so all four uniqueness/monotonicity tests exercise the ordinary HLC reservation branch rather than the Phase-D-specific reservePhaseDWindow branch selected by TSOStateMachine.PhaseDActive(). A regression that duplicates or reverses timestamps only during Phase-D window reservation would therefore leave these purported Phase-D invariants green; activate Phase D before starting issuance, as the boundary test later in this file already does.

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Comment thread kv/tso_slot_claim_test.go
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// The invariants below are the decision-independent half of
// docs/design/2026_08_29_proposed_tso_batch_slot_claims.md §6. They hold under

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P3 Badge Update test references to the renamed design document

This commit deletes the _proposed_ document in favor of docs/design/2026_08_29_partial_tso_batch_slot_claims.md, but this reference—and the analogous references in kv/sharded_coordinator_leader_test.go and adapter/admin_grpc_test.go—still names the deleted file. Following the tests' rationale therefore leads to a nonexistent document; update all three references to the new _partial_ path.

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