[ADD] Adding a blog post describing the review of "Introduction to the command line" by ultimatecoder · Pull Request #4 · ultimatecoder/Blog

ultimatecoder · 2017-03-01T14:09:18Z

Description: Writing blog post reviewing book Introduction to the Command Line.
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This review only tries to fix language issues, and is not extensive. My comments could also be ambiguous.

codingquark · 2017-03-02T11:12:30Z

+## tl;dr
+
+
+Every chapter will introduce a bunch of comandline utilities and will point to


codingquark · 2017-03-02T11:13:53Z

+its respective documentation for further learning. You should expect chapters
+describing from the [grep](https://www.gnu.org/software/grep/manual/grep.html)
+command to [GNU Octave](https://www.gnu.org/software/octave/) which is a
+scientific programming language. The chapters are independent from each other.


independent of

codingquark · 2017-03-02T11:14:25Z

+describing from the [grep](https://www.gnu.org/software/grep/manual/grep.html)
+command to [GNU Octave](https://www.gnu.org/software/octave/) which is a
+scientific programming language. The chapters are independent from each other.
+The book is must read if you new to the


if you are new to

codingquark · 2017-03-02T11:14:58Z

+command to [GNU Octave](https://www.gnu.org/software/octave/) which is a
+scientific programming language. The chapters are independent from each other.
+The book is must read if you new to the
+[GNU/Linux](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Linux) command line. If you new are at


If you are at

codingquark · 2017-03-02T11:16:54Z

+The book is community driven and published under [FLOSS
+Manual](http://flossmanuals.net). It is a collaborative effort of the
+[FSF](http://www.fsf.org/) community. The fun part is you can contribute to this
+book by adding new chapters or improve an existing one. I fixed one typo to this


or by improving

codingquark · 2017-03-02T11:31:47Z

+
+I didn't encounter with any saviour mistakes except one typo. The section of
+**Userful customizations** on page number 80 of my printed version, contains
+below example:


the following example:

codingquark · 2017-03-02T11:32:22Z

+```
+
+Here, **$arg** is a misprint. A shell variable is never assigned with **$**. It
+should be `args=$1`.  I myself has corrected the typographical error in the


I have corrected the

codingquark · 2017-03-02T11:32:40Z

+
+Here, **$arg** is a misprint. A shell variable is never assigned with **$**. It
+should be `args=$1`.  I myself has corrected the typographical error in the
+book.  This change will be published maybe in the next release of this book.


release of the book.

codingquark · 2017-03-02T11:32:53Z

+book.  This change will be published maybe in the next release of this book.
+
+If you are encountering any mistakes while reading, I request you to fix the
+change to [here](http://write.flossmanuals.net/command-line/introduction/). The


codingquark · 2017-03-02T11:33:24Z

+If you are encountering any mistakes while reading, I request you to fix the
+change to [here](http://write.flossmanuals.net/command-line/introduction/). The
+interface for editing the book is beginner friendly. It took less than 5 minutes
+to drive the change.


May be what you want to say is "make the change" instead of "drive the change"?

- scripts/build & scripts/test: add set -euo pipefail (and a shebang to scripts/test) so a failed build aborts CI instead of link-checking a stale _site (review #1) - scripts/test: move the --ignore-urls list into a documented bash array (review #5); note the baseurl<->swap-urls coupling in _config.yml (#6) - ci.yml: run bundle exec bundler-audit check --update as a real per-PR security scan (#2); add least-privilege permissions: contents: read (#3) - Pin all workflow actions to commit SHAs with version comments (#4) - Re-add minification via jekyll-minifier 0.2.2 (Jekyll 4-compatible, production-only) (#7) - Drop analytics: remove the leftover GA placeholder; UA died in 2023 (#8) - Fix 45 image references across 11 posts + about.md that used {{site.url}}/assets or hardcoded /assets and omitted baseurl, so they 404'd on the /Blog project-page URL. Verified via a production (minified) build + htmlproofer run with all internal links resolving.

* Modernize build/deploy: Jekyll 4.4, GitHub Actions, GitHub Pages - Upgrade Jekyll 3.8.5 -> 4.4.1, pin Ruby 3.2.0, refresh gem dependencies and add x86_64-linux to the lockfile so CI can install on Linux runners - Add bundler-audit as a dev dependency; no known CVEs found - Fix scripts/test: htmlproofer was silently checking zero pages because the shell's missing LANG made Ruby default to US-ASCII; also drop the https-enforcement noise on old post links and ignore confirmed-dead external URLs - Retire the dead Travis CI / rsync-to-jaysinh.com pipeline (.travis.yml, scripts/deploy, CNAME, keypair.pem.enc) since that domain is no longer owned; the site now targets https://ultimatecoder.github.io/Blog/ with the matching /Blog baseurl - Add .github/workflows/ci.yml (build + link-check on PRs) and pages.yml (build + deploy to GitHub Pages on push to master) * Ignore two more external links that block GitHub Actions' IPs pythonexpress.in and hackerearth.com both return 200 from a normal network but 403 specifically from GitHub-hosted runner IPs (bot/WAF blocking, not a dead link) - confirmed via the ci.yml failure on PR #99. * Address PR review: fail-fast, security scan, minifier, image baseurl fix - scripts/build & scripts/test: add set -euo pipefail (and a shebang to scripts/test) so a failed build aborts CI instead of link-checking a stale _site (review #1) - scripts/test: move the --ignore-urls list into a documented bash array (review #5); note the baseurl<->swap-urls coupling in _config.yml (#6) - ci.yml: run bundle exec bundler-audit check --update as a real per-PR security scan (#2); add least-privilege permissions: contents: read (#3) - Pin all workflow actions to commit SHAs with version comments (#4) - Re-add minification via jekyll-minifier 0.2.2 (Jekyll 4-compatible, production-only) (#7) - Drop analytics: remove the leftover GA placeholder; UA died in 2023 (#8) - Fix 45 image references across 11 posts + about.md that used {{site.url}}/assets or hardcoded /assets and omitted baseurl, so they 404'd on the /Blog project-page URL. Verified via a production (minified) build + htmlproofer run with all internal links resolving. --------- Co-authored-by: Jaysinh Shukla <jaysinhshukla@Jaysinhs-MacBook-Pro-2.local>

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		Every chapter will introduce a bunch of comandline utilities and will point to

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